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Monday 21 May 2018

the 4 little birds

once upon a time there were 4 little birds resting on a branch after a big day making a nest. Then suddenly a bird disappears and the 3 other birds look down they see the other bird hanging on the branch. "where'd ya go" said one bird "i fainted" said the hanging bird. "vamos por ti" said the spanish bird.  

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2 comments:

  1. Anonymous1 August 2018 at 18:58

    Hi Nick, I like your story and how you added a Spanish bird .But I think you could of added some more punctuation in your story and/or make it longer/make another one. By Ashen

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